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Real Anger Management

Author: Semper Fidelis
ASL Info:    22/Male/ouahu, Hawaii
Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 135 /185 /60
Words: 271
Class/Type: Poetry /Venting
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its an anger management class for pent up aggression.

Real Anger Management

Ha, you laugh at me-
Degrade my self image,
to preserve your popularity-
Preps like you are killed -
by people like me-

Fuck you and everything-
you think you stand for-
You are nothing and always will be-
Laugh now-
while you can still breath-

I am unstable-
volitile by nature-
Wholes in my wall
and broken knuckles
are my testament-

These cuts invigorate me-
Blood is the drug for me-
I'll show you how
fucking funny I can be-

Watch this infusion-
You can't feel your face-
Bloody nose-
broken teeth-
who looks funny now?

Insult my intelligence-
to raise your self higher
among fools?-
Fine for me-
the fall alone will kill you-

I can see you wallowing
in your own bodily emisions-
red lavender in apperance-
Ha, who's funny know?
Squirming in your pain-

There is a nice bat here in my hand-
Love the balance-
It dances a sweet ballet across your body-
It's foot falls, muted thuds in your face-
Ha Ha, The wood is a ruby to be cherished-

Anger management?
Who'd need it if we'd express it?
Talk does nothing but increase the problem-
Talk could not save you-

This is the real anger managment-
Pummeling you into the pile of shit-
you really are-
Ha, who's funny now??

As you beg for mercy-
crying through the pain-
the reality sets in for you-
that you won't walk away-

This is no nightmare for you-
are a wet dream for me-
this is real time-
this is reality-

Submitted on 2004-06-26 23:33:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Some raw aggression, violence and rage in this text...nice. It's funny how originality in poetry seems to be achieved through simple emotions when for centuries it's been all about complicating whatever one would write about.
| Posted on 2004-06-27 00:00:00 | by the apocrypha | [ Reply to This ]
  Haha... Awesome last stanza. I loved the poem- but I HATE all the labels. (The PREP thing) I swear people are more prejudice about what other people wear than they are prejudice due to race. That's society these days though. I understand- I guess I just felt like ranting.

"There is a nice bat here in my hand-
Love the balance-
It dances a sweet ballet across your body-"

More awesome lines! I can taste your anger. Cooool.
| Posted on 2004-06-27 00:00:00 | by LadyInRed88 | [ Reply to This ]
   I had laughed at your description, which made the first lines even funnier. It reminds me of the tv show where it shows the actor talking all confidently, but he's really just talking in front of the mirror and all awkward when the real person he's intimidated by walks in. This is a letter to the people you hate, add some spacing, and here you go. It's like in dreaming, we face our problems directly and somehow over come them. The dream allows us to be as confident and freakishly powerful as we want as to make the threat seem miniscule. When we wake up the situation feels like it's been delt with and it can be handled with a higher degree of confidence. I don't really care for this type of writing though, it's just venting. You're powerful confident, etc, they're weak and at your mercy. Just a dream. Give them the letter then you'll have all my attention and respect ;P.
| Posted on 2004-06-26 00:00:00 | by Aksuri | [ Reply to This ]
  This is cool, I like it, it reminds me of that chevelle song, "seeing red again" I like it, lol, it is definantly about anger management classes and such. I could use some of those, I can't stand posers, and I can't recall a time I left the house and didn't get in trouble some how for saying or doing something because I hate them so much, lol. nice job!
| Posted on 2004-07-11 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]

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