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    dots Submission Name: You're My Everythingdots
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    Author: Katana Ryoko
    ASL Info:    17/F/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 483/428/109
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 823
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    Bytes: 490



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    dotsYou're My Everythingdots
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    I wanna make love to ya
    Wanna know what you like
    And I want to look in your eyes
    And tell you how I feel
    Kiss you in front of the world
    To let them all know
    That you belong to me
    And no one can change that
    Cuz you're the beat in my heart
    The joy in my life
    And I could go on
    But there's really no point
    It all comes down to
    You're my everything, love
    And no one can change that




    Submitted on 2008-01-15 18:59:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love is blind, and isn't it great! One place in life where not seeing is a good thing! This has lots of feeling and soul in it, and is a delightful love poem!
    | Posted on 2008-01-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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