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    dots Submission Name: Just You and Medots
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    Author: J_B4-ever
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 688
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 476



    Description:
       This poem is about the hardships my fiancee and I have faced over the pass two years. No matter how tough things were we are still together and our love is still strong. So matter how tough the road is ahead just believe in yourself or each other and everything will be ok.


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    dotsJust You and Medots
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    I never really knew you
    You were just someone new
    Someone I hated....
    but also someone I treasured...

    We've been through hardships,
    pain,
    tears,
    heartbreaks.....
    but we never gave up

    We'll be together no matter how bad
    the road lies ahead...
    You are my world...
    my hopes and dreams

    We'll be together forever my love....
    just you and me....




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