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    dots Submission Name: Irresponsibledots
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    Author: DemonicInk
    ASL Info:    21/F/Gypsie
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 29/10/28
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 226
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 695



    Description:
       Written in exasperation at my mate's antics.


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    dotsIrresponsibledots
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    I'm so sick of this shit
    You chosing riffraff over family
    Seven days left til eternity
    And you waste them all

    I'm gone, you hear me?
    GONE on Tuesday
    Make the most of the time you do have
    Stop throwing it away on those undeserving

    Family comes first, you told me
    What a lie, you're such a liar
    More like video games and strangers
    So nice to see where your priorities are

    If you don't shape up, we're gone for good
    Take heed of my warning
    Discount it at your peril
    You'll find I'm deadly serious

    I suggest you listen.




    Submitted on 2008-01-16 15:08:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this had a lot of emotion. I just think you have to learn to state it more clearly and make it flow better. good start!
    | Posted on 2008-01-16 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]



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