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    dots Submission Name: Life and Deathdots
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    Author: Canadian333
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 726
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    Description:
       The peom is about the Earth talking about humans destroying the Earth, and the sun also gives us life. It ends with the Earth saying it can give us life, or it can kill us.


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    dotsLife and Deathdots
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    People say I give Life
    I'm not a mans wife
    All life lives on me
    On ym land, in my air
    And in me seas

    Everything that lives
    In the Seas
    Land, and air
    Take care of me please
    People could have taken more care

    My colors are brwon, blue, and green
    You should see
    My beautiful scences
    I dont only give Life
    I can cuase Death

    People love to look at me
    But hate to look
    At my partner
    Who if wasn't here
    There would be no Life

    What gives us Life
    Gives us Death




    Submitted on 2008-01-17 09:50:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i don,t know but if i were you, i,d do a spell check before posting,there are some really bad spelling mistakes in your poem.maybe you are not english and not used to writing or speaking in this language( i know the feeling, i make mistakes also) but on "word " you can do a spell check"abc".it would give your poem a better presentation.sorry for correcting you but i,m only trying to be helpful.
    take care
    tschüß
    ger
    | Posted on 2008-01-17 00:00:00 | by eyeless in gaza | [ Reply to This ]

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