Im usually not one to judge others poetry style, and I try to maintain a sort of neutral stance when critiquing poetry. I'd tell them if i liked it or not, but my advice would be neutral. I have to tell you that in my opinion though, this piece was entirely too much like a riddle to flow as a poem. It was kind of like a crippled free verse that didn't build momentum, had no sense of meter, and a complete lack of rhyme or other literary techniques. The only real captivity it instilled in me was that I was curious up until the very end as to what the poem was referring to. Although you used personification in that the soil was speaking about itself, I didn't really get that connection from it. I'm trying to be honest, and I don't want to come off as mean, but I really think you should shy away from writing another poem like this, it just doesn't flow.