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    dots Submission Name: Brotherly Bloody Bereavementdots
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    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    17/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 12/17/34
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsBrotherly Bloody Bereavementdots
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    Fearsome eyes glare at one another
    They thought deeply of the others competition
    Even though both were bound by blood of brother
    To annihilate each one be their mission

    Envy and rivalry of who is granted best
    Had been in existence since before birth
    For they were trained and sent on a quest
    In which brothers would battled to prove worth

    While they prepare for mêlée one starts questioning
    The moral and justice in the arising acts
    Were true scruples of law truth from the glorious king?
    Or are these conflicts of kin against facts

    After the joust, following the death, he comprehends
    All the hate and enmity will leads to dead ends





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