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    dots Submission Name: Amphibian Vernaculardots
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    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    18/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.68 - 27/194/137
    Words: 284
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 104
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       The meter needs work, but I like the concept. I need some fresh things for my creative writing class since we're on free verse and I'm kind of out of the habit.

    It's a halfway true story. I did think I saw something dark jump into the shower curtain a few minutes ago. This is what came of it and I kind of like it.


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    dotsAmphibian Vernaculardots
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    I thought I saw a snake
    Slither into the curtain
    Of the white, crisp shower.
    I wonder if I hallucinated
    That sly and scaly creature.

    When I noticed it gliding
    Into the fabric near,
    It had a thought written on its side,
    Though not abstract;
    The word in permanent marker.

    When open I flung the door
    To the bathing stall near
    Me, that thoughtful snake
    Was absent in my sight.
    I was quite confused.

    Though not bemused, no.
    Only shocked to see this
    Thing, a creature sitting
    On its tail
    Wanting to speak with me!

    In a hissing lovely tone
    He spoke of my lost dreams.
    You know, the ones that were caught
    Between crashing waves
    On the shore of intellect.

    Not a word was uttered there,
    On the table with the towels,
    That anyone could have absorbed;
    However, I understood
    This amphibian vernacular.

    I stroked his green and yellow coat
    Of shining pearls in glass.
    He slithered up onto my neck
    To lecture for a while more,
    And I gladly obliged.

    We stood there, that snake
    And I, well he laid while
    I stood. We chatted for
    What seemed hours about
    Life and philosophy.

    I told that him I disagreed
    With one of his opinions.
    Just as the words spilled
    Out my mouth
    The snake was nowhere to be seen.

    I exited the washing place
    To have a sip of water.
    'Twas then I gazed upon the clock,
    And watch its ever wise hands,
    To see not even five minutes pass'd.

    I excused it as a tainted
    Fancy and went about my way,
    But still I wonder about
    That slithering creature
    Of thought.




    Submitted on 2008-01-18 00:29:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Its funny how ones imagination can go into overdrive when you thought you almost saw something, this make me think of me when I’m daydreaming. Wouldn’t it be nice for something to spur up to give you advice in advance and to challenge your own intellect?

    I couldn’t help to see the evil side of this, a snake talking philosophy and giving advice, afterwards to go and have a sip of water, I bet you’ll be thirsty lol. Scary thoughts.

    A funny, scary and weird read, I enjoyed it,
    Thanks.
    Johan
    | Posted on 2008-01-18 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]



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