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    dots Submission Name: How We Rememberdots
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    Author: Persephone
    ASL Info:    19/f/ US
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 328/352/136
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       No, this has nothing to do with cutting. Instead, it is mainly about how we can remember that the scar on our left leg caim from a fall back when we were five, or that the first hurtful betrayal came when we were thirteen, and along those lines.


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    Have you ever wondered how it seems that every scar we seem to remember exactly how we get it? As if we must carry around that permanent rememberance of a time so far away. Yet no matter how far away, the scar and memories are always clear. And that's why the truth, and all things worth living for, have to hurt. If it didn't hurt, we wouldn't remember it. If things didn't leave marks, our memories wouldn't be so clear. Oh, how simple that to remember we must bare scars, either on our body or our heart, or even in our minds. In the end, it's all about the marks that things leave.




    Submitted on 2008-01-20 20:06:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yes, this is all very true... i remember all my scars... and some of them were intensely beautiful experiences, no matter how bad i thought they were at the time.

    clear-sighted.
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    | Posted on 2008-01-21 00:00:00 | by silent strings | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah.
    Scars are like that.
    Usually we carry the painful memories around with us like baggage, waiting for them to poke up and torment us while we're at our weakest...
    Everyone has them.
    | Posted on 2008-01-20 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]


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