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    dots Submission Name: Getting offdots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 800
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    Bytes: 468



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    dotsGetting offdots
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    we pass by the day without getting off
    It just blows by and nothing comes up
    no matter how hard we push and shove
    there is just no getting off the high
    that we have been on for so long
    its all so worth the wait to get off
    the feeling we feel is like rolling thunder
    as if it would never end and just keep coming
    I am all ways thinking and contemplating
    getting it on then getting it off




    Submitted on 2008-01-20 23:39:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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