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    dots Submission Name: Only A Frienddots
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    Author: BeautifulSoul
    ASL Info:    17/F/In
    Elite Ratio:    7.5 - 51/22/16
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
    Total Views: 125
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    dotsOnly A Frienddots
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    Being only a friend to someone,
    when love is what you seek,
    is like cutting out your tongue,
    so you can never speak.




    Submitted on 2008-01-21 13:33:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short, sweet and true!
    I really liked how you said this, ,abstract and beautiful,

    Nice write,

    Thanks,
    Spin
    | Posted on 2008-04-24 00:00:00 | by Spin | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so true! i think we've all felt thay way before but you said it best!
    | Posted on 2008-01-31 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and too the point.
    Well, welcome to Elite Skills.

    Ok, you are probably going to get this a lot, but you should try to make the poem longer. This is a good idea, and I have a LOT of poems about the same thing. The thing with me is he was my best friend, and he knew how I felt, but we are still friends. You should try doing the poem in free verse. You would be able to say what you want without being constricted to rhyme. Besides that, I think it was right to the point. Use that to expand it.

    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2008-01-24 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]


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