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    dots Submission Name: Grind his Bonesdots
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    Author: _proper_noun_
    ASL Info:    20/m/OK
    Elite Ratio:    5.36 - 106/88/24
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsGrind his Bonesdots
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    Fee fie foe fum,
    We both spilled our blood and the deal was done.
    Be we live or be we dead,
    'To death do we part' now seems pretend.

    Fie foe fum fee,
    I said I'd do anything to set you free.
    Be they lies or be they truth,
    My words were broken and now are moot.

    Foe fum fee fie,
    I met a man who did nought but cry.
    Be he dying or be he dead,
    I'll burn that fucker to get him out of my head.

    Fum fee fie foe,
    The plans are not how the stories go.
    For dreams have monsters and life is a joke,
    It's just taking too long to get the fucking punchline.




    Submitted on 2008-01-21 14:01:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i liked your use of Fee Fi Foe Fum to rhyme with.is very creative. I'm not a poet so I think its really cool when someone can do that.
    As far as the punch line goes, it sounds like the other guy really got the "punch."
    | Posted on 2008-01-22 00:00:00 | by azurwarrior | [ Reply to This ]


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