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    dots Submission Name: Regret Lovedots
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    Author: Fallyn Angel
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 44/69/91
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsRegret Lovedots
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    Follow you heart.
    Listen to your gut.
    Which is it?

    Confusion never surpasses.
    Step back some.
    Take your time.

    Jealousy turns me evil.
    A side no one has seen comes out.
    Can anyone stop me?

    Wait and see.
    Patience is key.
    Love conquers all.

    Close your eyes.
    It's almost over.
    Broken hearted again.

    Let go.
    Leave now.
    Don't look back.

    Look up.
    You've made it.
    You've finished it.

    He did this.
    He'll regret it.
    He'll pay forever.

    He won't forget.
    He killed you.
    He didn't save you.




    Submitted on 2008-01-21 14:34:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is good, but it feels like it needs some re-arrangement. The stanzas feel out of order...
    | Posted on 2008-03-17 00:00:00 | by Vampiric Death | [ Reply to This ]
      ...hmmm. It was very emotional and painful. But good.
    ...not sure what else to say...
    | Posted on 2008-03-15 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]


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