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    dots Submission Name: my brothers hatrid for the holidaysdots
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    Author: hidden lady
    ASL Info:    28/female/nebraska
    Elite Ratio:    4.47 - 116/118/30
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       my bother wrote this one and I told him I'ld poast it.


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    dotsmy brothers hatrid for the holidaysdots
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    been a long time
    and the holidays still not done

    three years since i felt
    anything for them

    another thanksgiving
    just the same as a wednesday
    another christmas
    just the same as last tuesday


    i remember
    when it was special

    i remember
    when i cared more

    i remember
    when i felt something
    akin to human




    Submitted on 2008-01-21 16:11:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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