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    dots Submission Name: Sweet Somber Kissdots
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    Author: forevermortal
    ASL Info:    31/F/Home
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 288
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 80
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    dotsSweet Somber Kissdots
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    Sweet Somber Kiss

    She whispers, she cries, and then she say
    "I love you, why do you treat me this way"
    You look at her like you have done like that same first day
    You fell in love with her when you were both young before you had so many bills to pay

    You hold her face in her hand
    You kiss her gently on the lips and hopes that she would understand
    You kiss her with so much passion, so much love, so much
    That she can feel you're so true by that simple touch

    You wipe away that somber tear
    Just to show her that you really care
    Without a word, you say it true
    And at the same moment she understood and he knew, she knew

    "Baby, you show me the world, I have never seen before"
    "The love from you shows me you really care more and more"
    "Why do you treat me this way?"
    "I never believe I could find such a true man until I met you that day"
    "I feel your heart beating as it seems as it is apart of me"
    " I never understood until this day that this is how love should really be"

    At that, she laid her head on his shoulder
    He held her closely as he starts to say
    "I love you from the very start, from that very first day"
    "The very first moments, in the very same way"
    "I want you do know that I will always love you"
    "And these words are nothing for what I can do"
    "But I always want you to remember"
    "and never forget"
    "That I am always happy that we have met"




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