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    dots Submission Name: Dark Whispersdots
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    Author: forevermortal
    ASL Info:    31/F/Home
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 362
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
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    Dark Whispers

    Tears lay awake... I dream the night still
    I can not breath, I can not feel
    Tears drop... they stumble, they fall
    I can not walk... I can not crawl

    Darkness awaits for me... dark whispers, sing
    The deep inside of me.. burns and stings
    Darkness fills the air... fills the room
    Will I be remembered when I finally meet my doom?

    Stairs follow me around... follow my everyday
    Feeling my all... feeling the emptiness the same old way
    Having no reason... having no peace
    Only this pain that continues to increase

    Dark whispers... dark soul
    Feeling my own... leaving me whole
    Listen closely... listen deep
    I am aways awaiting... as you are content in your sleep

    Feeling trapped... feeling without much hope
    Feeling this depressing... pressing with this rope
    Fearing life... fearing death
    Fearing everything... even the air of my last dying breath

    Seeing the lost... seeing it all too real
    Hearing the lies... hearing them still
    Feeling the hate... feeling it now
    Tasting the way... and wasting just how
    Smelling the last memory... of the beast's breath
    And how he hurt me... how he wanted my death

    But still I press on... continue to wake
    But this life... is always too hard to take
    But still I press on... press on... press on
    Farther and farther as years have gone

    Still I hear... hear those taunting laughters, dark whispering, bye
    Still I hear... like it was yesterday... him standing there watching me cry

    How can I forget... How can I forgive
    How can I go on... and continue to live
    Seeing that I am still here in his eyes
    Even after those many years... after so many lies

    Even though I haven't seen him for many
    Many long years... he still haunts my lasting memory
    My body aches still... still the abuse lingers
    And still I feel those hands... and see those bloody fingers

    Why? I ask, Why?
    What have I done to you to make me cry?
    Dark whispers
    Dark whispers
    Dark whispers
    But no answers why
    Still I ask... and still I cry





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