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    dots Submission Name: Déjà Vudots
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    Author: xieno
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 7/16/24
    Words: 272
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 573
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    Bytes: 1740



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       9/13/07


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    dotsDéjà Vudots
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    Hey, I think I've met someone like you before
    You're the kind of person who looks everywhere
    When she doesn't even know what she's looking for
    And every day you wake up with hopes too high
    Thinking today will be a little brighter than the last
    Then when the suns gone and you go to sleep that night
    You kick yourself because you know things never change

    Are you sure we've never met before?
    I could swear I've seen you somewhere before
    Aren't you that girl who walks the street all day long
    Like she's searching for somewhere safe to go
    Because she can't place her finger on where to call home?
    And you just wanna go somewhere where you're not so criticized all the damn time
    Yeah, I sure do know what that's like

    You seem a lot like me in a number of ways
    You have that pretty little smile and too much makeup on your face
    And you sift through personalities trying to figure yourself out
    You can't act like yourself because you just don't know how
    You have a lot to say, but you're quiet and distant from everything
    In fear you'll say something stupid and mess up again
    That's probably the smart thing to do
    Considering everything that you've been through

    Well, my cabs here and I should probably hit the road
    It's been a nice talk with you, I'd love to do it once more
    Although I think I've figured out who you are
    But I'll just wink and pat your shoulder goodbye
    I know we'll be crossing paths again sometime soon




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