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    dots Submission Name: We Were Fine Untill Something Came Alomndots
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    Author: Billy Budd
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWe Were Fine Untill Something Came Alomndots
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    Nothing at all
    Matches to him
    Not even God
    but he is a God to you
    its a blatant fixation
    and an obvious fascination
    and your obssessions dont do
    anything for me
    because
    we were fine
    untill your fixation came along
    we were fine until
    something came along
    and ruined the vibe

    Nothing in the world
    matches my jealousy
    to your god
    of gods
    its actually amazing
    how quickly you can
    forget me
    and all the things
    i meant to you
    but i came to expect this
    because
    we were fine
    until something came along




    Submitted on 2008-01-22 07:59:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This peice was pretty good, a little unclear on what it was you were talking about, but pretty good.
    | Posted on 2008-01-23 00:00:00 | by faded color | [ Reply to This ]



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