This is pretty cute. Short and sweet. It seems very methodically calculated. The lines were put together perfectly. How the last line on first two and last two stanzas rhyme. And the parts the two lines behind them rhyme as well. I usually do not like rhyming poetry but there is something nice and sweet about this particular poem. Plus it really reminded me of a certain someone so you get props for invoking strong feeling. (^_^) Over all good write. Keep it up.