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    dots Submission Name: Do you?dots
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    Author: Fadeintoreality
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 33/114/64
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 728
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       It was written in less than a minute. keep that in mind. but it had so much meaning behind it.


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    dotsDo you?dots
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    How much I would
    give up
    fuck up
    tear up
    For you?
    Do you know how much
    I love
    care
    hurt
    for you?
    Can you understand how I
    feel
    think
    believe
    that I am wrong?
    Do you understand that I
    cry
    scream
    m'kay up
    everything around me?
    Do you know that I realize I mean
    nothing
    zero
    nada
    to you?
    And do you realize that when I smile its
    fake
    stressed
    not really there.
    Because I just know now I am done
    trying
    caring
    screaming
    hurting.
    for you.




    Submitted on 2008-01-23 13:12:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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