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    dots Submission Name: My Lovedots
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    Author: CourtneyLynne
    ASL Info:    23/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 74/70/56
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 676
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    dotsMy Lovedots
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    One sweet word, a simple noun
    From you, my love
    Would never cause me to be down
    For you, my love
    I know Iíll always want to be
    With you, my love
    Your eyes are all I want to see
    So true, my love
    I want to hold you in my arms
    Just you, my love
    Chuckle at your gentle charms
    Just ooh, my love
    Just know Iím in your heart
    I do, my love
    I know Iíll never part
    From you, my love.




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    ||| Comments |||
      =]]]] Nice nice nice. No line breaks, of course. It sounded more like a song to me, a soft tone of a female singer. Keep it up!

    x3 Taki
    | Posted on 2008-06-16 00:00:00 | by RulerxTaki | [ Reply to This ]
      love it. your writing rocks!
    | Posted on 2008-01-24 00:00:00 | by Kaygrl | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem has a very fluid rhythm and, like Epiphany said, it would work very well as a song. For some reason, poems that repeat words or stanzas always get to me, and this is no exception. Nice write, and keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2008-01-23 00:00:00 | by Keaton Volkov | [ Reply to This ]
      This piece put me, instantly, into a rhythm of a song strummed on a guitar or oddly, a flute...simplicity expresses "IT"self lyrically and I liked that about this!

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif
    | Posted on 2008-01-23 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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