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    Author: Ceedra47
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 2/5/48
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotslove...dots
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    The moment i met you
    you stand out from the crowd
    you caught my eyes to look upon yours
    and made me feel that ill be yours

    your smile weakens my knees
    your looks surrounds me with butterflies
    your touch simply comforts me
    and telling me that you're mine

    how could we ever have each other?
    who could ever thought that love at first sight exists?
    well i guess its called destiny or maybe fate
    so lucky me to have you as my soul mate

    you're the only one who made me so content
    made me feel so important and loved
    at i finally found you
    at last i knew what my life's worth..its for you...




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