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    dots Submission Name: Lovelessdots
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    Author: Raito
    Elite Ratio:    1.79 - 3/6/12
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 130
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 672



    Description:
       Death in form. My second poem!
    (Proof read this time.)


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    dotsLovelessdots
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    Help me please!
    I don't know why
    They run from me
    And make me cry.

    I can't help it,
    What I do.
    My candles lit
    You fear me too.

    Uncontrolable
    Unimaginable
    Unacceptable
    Unforgivable

    Help me please!
    It's always dark.
    They torture me
    With white-hot sparks.

    Everything I touch
    Loses it's soul.
    Sucked in by my touch
    Into my black hole.

    I cannot help myself.
    I am death in form.
    I cannot love myself.
    I'm full of everybody's scorn.





    Submitted on 2008-01-23 18:59:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ...interesting...It reminded me of a lovesick vampire for some reason.
    | Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by Coripa | [ Reply to This ]



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