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    dots Submission Name: Semi Tranquil Youth.dots
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    Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
    ASL Info:    20/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.68 - 46/117/99
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 94
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 391



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    dotsSemi Tranquil Youth.dots
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    Dancing endlessly,
    The only image embedded in mind—
    A maiden so pure,
    Feels with all her soul.

    A beauty so deep,
    She smiles even upon the lowliest being.
    Fondness profusely sparks.

    Heavy lids awaken,
    Realizing that the youth was merely nothing—
    Nothing but solely an illusion created by the unconscious.




    Submitted on 2008-01-23 20:50:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What I thought about , is the divine images that come out of "the unconscious" ... just as you said for this beautiful dream-self of yours.

    I often wonder which side is the illusion side ...
    | Posted on 2008-01-23 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]



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