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    dots Submission Name: TheFlowered Scents Sensed.Sensationdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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    dotsTheFlowered Scents Sensed.Sensationdots
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    The Flowered Scents...Sensed...Sensation

    Scintillating, searing red
    Seas of silliness & sorrow
    Singing Songs

    Colorfully Colliding
    Chaos
    Charm
    Character

    Bouquet Beaming
    Beatles Breakin

    "IT" down
    in lyric, rhthym,
    rhyme
    Flowers delivered
    Spot on
    in time ~*~ <@>




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    ||| Comments |||
      Well written again M' Lady. Very upbeat and it bounces along really well.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2008-01-25 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      This is full of great alliteration and word play. I like the rhyme in the last stanza too. I'm sorry that this is such a brief comment, but I enjoyed this.

    Nicely done,
    Amy
    | Posted on 2008-01-24 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      This is beautiful...I must favor it
    | Posted on 2008-01-24 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]


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