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    dots Submission Name: The Three Lovely Young Damesdots
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    Author: isselman2001
    Elite Ratio:    5.08 - 35/44/43
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Cheesy Joke/Misc
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    dotsThe Three Lovely Young Damesdots
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    There were once these three lovely young dames,
    With exceedingly uncanny names:
    There was Baker and Zater and Cook;
    And then one of them shouted: “Dames, look!
    Here comes old Mr. Flop who is pointy on top
    And in parts is exceedingly round!”

    Then said Flop: “Don’t you dames make a sound!
    There are hears that I hear going ‘round:
    That Miss Baker’s a breaker,
    Mrs. Zader’s a traitor,
    And Mz Cook? she’s a genuine crook.
    As for me – Mr. Flop – I’m an aging old fop
    Who just happens to be a good cop.”




    Submitted on 2008-01-24 18:10:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice little Nursery rhymey thing you have going on there. I don't really enjoy Nursery rhymes all that much any more, but what can i say, it made me smile.
    I don't get the joke, though... Maybe it's because I'm too tired first hour
    | Posted on 2008-01-25 00:00:00 | by Imadjinn | [ Reply to This ]
      First impressions, I thought it was cute,it make me think of a nursery rhyme, I also liked the characters names, so much for don't judge a book by its cover !

    Johan
    | Posted on 2008-01-25 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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