Quite a delightful write-up, this is ...Tiffany, I enjoyed reading this
..........there is great imagination and uniqueness here, that is seen quite plainly all through this poem and this makes it all the more interesting for the readers......
.....This poem was skilfully worded right from the title "Sunset Snow Salsa" to the last word.......
Nicely portrayed description of nature and the surroundings during snowfall.... ..........
.........It takes the reader for an enchanting trip to the snow mountains, just by viewing the lovely picture of snow, trees, twilight etc. that you have painted in this poem.
I love your wonderful vision that transcends the immediate and the visible and dares to look beyond. Yes, the presence of thick, dark clouds does not imply any loss in sun's splendour... in fact, their co-existence brings forth God's art in all its majestic glory.
Description is so realistic, it is a lovely word-painting.
Sunset Snow Salsa- what a lovely and original thought. I quite like it. Dancing colors, snowflakes, flames, and trees. Neat way you have the flakes falling down too. This poem brings lots of sunshine on a cold winter's day.
at first the title of this piece confused me, and I almost passed this by, but then I decided that I would give it a chance, and at least read the first few lines. I liked the way this described sunset in detail, and made me realize why it was given the title it has. Makes a hundred times more sense having red it. The description was superb, the imagery vibrant. Over all I think you did a splendid job of writing this.
Submission Name: Sunset Snow Salsa
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