I love your wonderful vision that transcends the immediate and the visible and dares to look beyond. Yes, the presence of thick, dark clouds does not imply any loss in sun's splendour... in fact, their co-existence brings forth God's art in all its majestic glory.
Description is so realistic, it is a lovely word-painting.
Sunset Snow Salsa- what a lovely and original thought. I quite like it. Dancing colors, snowflakes, flames, and trees. Neat way you have the flakes falling down too. This poem brings lots of sunshine on a cold winter's day.
at first the title of this piece confused me, and I almost passed this by, but then I decided that I would give it a chance, and at least read the first few lines. I liked the way this described sunset in detail, and made me realize why it was given the title it has. Makes a hundred times more sense having red it. The description was superb, the imagery vibrant. Over all I think you did a splendid job of writing this.