Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: What I know as a writerdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Fadeintoreality
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 33/114/64
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 717
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 811



    Description:
       this is. I dont actually even know


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsWhat I know as a writerdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I can sit her and honestly tell you
    that as writers we work as a whole..
    sitting in chairs
    pondering
    thinking
    trusting
    our ink filled pens
    and we know that the words we speak can be critiqued
    hated
    misread
    misunderstood
    And we lie to ourselves, our writing is a way out
    from the truth
    the now
    the real
    My heart can continue beating for the stories I know to be true
    but I will never know,
    for my pen shows me the way
    the beat
    the strum
    of my own path
    And I am thankful for I know now that I will always be
    a believer
    a artist
    a painter of words
    We as writers..sacrafice our world
    our lifes
    our beat
    for you.




    Submitted on 2008-01-25 01:47:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I like the measure and how the lines go from long standalones, to short, pointmaking groupings. You have several typos. Overall, very truthful. I liked it.
    | Posted on 2008-03-10 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    156510

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Bond written by saartha
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Giving written by jjd
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry