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    dots Submission Name: What I know as a writerdots
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    Author: Fadeintoreality
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 33/114/64
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       this is. I dont actually even know


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    dotsWhat I know as a writerdots
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    I can sit her and honestly tell you
    that as writers we work as a whole..
    sitting in chairs
    pondering
    thinking
    trusting
    our ink filled pens
    and we know that the words we speak can be critiqued
    hated
    misread
    misunderstood
    And we lie to ourselves, our writing is a way out
    from the truth
    the now
    the real
    My heart can continue beating for the stories I know to be true
    but I will never know,
    for my pen shows me the way
    the beat
    the strum
    of my own path
    And I am thankful for I know now that I will always be
    a believer
    a artist
    a painter of words
    We as writers..sacrafice our world
    our lifes
    our beat
    for you.




    Submitted on 2008-01-25 01:47:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the measure and how the lines go from long standalones, to short, pointmaking groupings. You have several typos. Overall, very truthful. I liked it.
    | Posted on 2008-03-10 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]


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