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    dots Submission Name: Ode to Mollydots
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    Author: Aaron Felix
    ASL Info:    17/m/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 141/148/71
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsOde to Mollydots
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    Molly, You were the deepest dog I ever knew,
    truly, the philosopher's mind on a canine scale, with
    your whiskers sharp as Occam's razor. Is it true
    to find yourself you simply chased your tail?





    Submitted on 2008-01-25 03:02:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh lovely mutt of mine
    so sublime in mind
    pristine and kind
    your doggy senses blow my mind
    and hitch up the skirt of every female canine
    | Posted on 2008-01-25 00:00:00 | by bugsy | [ Reply to This ]


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