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    dots Submission Name: Saints And Sailorsdots
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    Author: CaughtRedhanded
    ASL Info:    18/F/TN
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94/41/22
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
    Total Views: 840
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       yesh yesh!


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    dotsSaints And Sailorsdots
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    This is where I say I've had enough
    And no one should ever feel the way that I have felt.
    A walking open wound, a trophy display of bruises
    And I don't believe that I'm getting any better.
    You're such a sucker.

    Waiting here with hopes the phone will ring
    And I'm thinking awful things
    I'm pretty sure that few would notice.
    And this is just starving for an argument.
    Anything at all to break the silence.

    Wandering this house like I've never wanted out
    And this is about as social as I get now.
    And I'm throwing away the letters that I've tryed to write you
    Cause they would never do, I would never do.
    Never.

    Waiting here with hopes the phone will ring
    And I'm thinking awful things
    I'm pretty sure that few would notice.
    And this is just starving for an argument.
    Anything at all to break the silence.
    So don't be a liar

    Don't say that "everything's working" when everything's broken.
    And you smile like a saint but you curse like a sailor
    And your eyes say "the jokes on me".
    But, Im not laughing
    You're not leaving
    Who do I think I am kidding?
    When I'm the only one locked in this hell.


    I hope the next girl you kiss has something terribly contagious on her lips.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Maybe you should give credit to the artist that actually wrote this. This was penned by chris carraba, of Dashboard Confessional. Please state that somewhere next time, as it is against the rules not to. Sorry to sound like a dick, it was probably unintentional, but please give proper credits on here.
    | Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by hybridsongwrite | [ Reply to This ]
      A twice poignant and sad piece, indeed! Unfortunately too many of us can identify with this feeling.... very well concieved and executed! I like it a ton! bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-04-07 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      this was cool. cause people think like this all the time so its easy to relate to but its not so incredibly simple that the reader has to think "duh"
    | Posted on 2008-02-05 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]


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