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    dots Submission Name: Hidden in the Rain.dots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 681
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    Description:
       I wrote this for a friend. She told me that she likes to take long walks in the rain because no one can see her tears.


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    dotsHidden in the Rain.dots
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    The rain, it falls,
    with effortless grace.
    As it hides the tears,
    upon her face.

    No one can see,
    that she is crying.
    Nor how her soul,
    is slowly dying.

    They only see,
    what she wants them to.
    A silent girl,
    with to much to do.

    She sits alone,
    watching her friends.
    Pondering when,
    the world will end.

    They can't see,
    all her a pain.
    For it is hidden,
    hidden in the rain.




    Submitted on 2008-01-25 11:27:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this poem. Crying in the rain. I always love this image, it is always so sentimental to cry in the rain. Sad, but happy because you hide your sadness. The rain can wash away tears.

    It is a beautiful poem!
    | Posted on 2008-04-22 00:00:00 | by PrInCeToNgIrL | [ Reply to This ]
      I wrote a poem like this not to long ago about hiding emotions so i can relate to the meaning behind this. a good write as usual.
    | Posted on 2008-01-28 00:00:00 | by Hazy skies | [ Reply to This ]


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