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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots

    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1387
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       Thoughts of love.

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    Love is blind, but still we see
    The meaning of it all
    Behind a shadowed sillouette
    It beckons with its call

    Love is kind, when pure and true
    With no falsehoods or deceit
    In a moment that is fleeting
    It will make a life complete

    Love is cruel, in many ways
    When lost without beseech
    The longing when its meant to be
    But forever out of reach

    Love is all, upon this earth
    Nothing else can near compare
    So, find the one who's in your heart
    And keep them growing there

    Submitted on 2008-01-25 14:39:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is excellent, and since at time we all feel love is very elusive, it is nice to read that it does exist around us if not within us. great job.
    | Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      OH my!! I loved this. Love is everythingand without it the world would be a very bleak place indeed. The last line So find the one whose in your heart and keep them growing there" It shows that love is to be nurtured like a garden. Thank you, Jerilynn
    | Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by Jerilynn | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this is great.

    You've taken, in my humble and modest opinion, a really fresh look at that ages-old enigma of love. I mean, I stand by the opinion that love can't be in any way typified, by words that is, but you still seem to do an excellent job.

    I like the positive message, and the way you use duality and binary opposites, and play on old out-of-vogue notions of the sentiment to kind of pinpoint what love is and how it is great. I also really like how you include that love is out of reach. Good job.
    | Posted on 2008-01-28 00:00:00 | by Pseudon IM | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaaah, love! One sage philosopher (or poet) says "it makes the world go round"! And so it does! Without love, where would we be?

    This is really excellent, but that no surprise, as all of your work is!! Makes one think fondly about that "special one" in one's life!!!! Nice work, Frank!
    | Posted on 2008-01-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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