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Submission Name: Love dots

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Author:	Frank Maguire
ASL Info:	52 / UK
Elite Ratio:	2.26 - 1727/1248/246
Words:	97

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	230
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	614

Description:
Thoughts of love.

Love

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Love is blind, but still we see
The meaning of it all
Behind a shadowed sillouette
It beckons with its call

Love is kind, when pure and true
With no falsehoods or deceit
In a moment that is fleeting
It will make a life complete

Love is cruel, in many ways
When lost without beseech
The longing when its meant to be
But forever out of reach

Love is all, upon this earth
Nothing else can near compare
So, find the one who's in your heart
And keep them growing there

Submitted on 2008-01-25 14:39:41 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is excellent, and since at time we all feel love is very elusive, it is nice to read that it does exist around us if not within us. great job.
Joy
| Posted on 2008-07-20 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
  OH my!! I loved this. Love is everythingand without it the world would be a very bleak place indeed. The last line So find the one whose in your heart and keep them growing there" It shows that love is to be nurtured like a garden. Thank you, Jerilynn
| Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by Jerilynn | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow, this is great.

You've taken, in my humble and modest opinion, a really fresh look at that ages-old enigma of love. I mean, I stand by the opinion that love can't be in any way typified, by words that is, but you still seem to do an excellent job.

I like the positive message, and the way you use duality and binary opposites, and play on old out-of-vogue notions of the sentiment to kind of pinpoint what love is and how it is great. I also really like how you include that love is out of reach. Good job.
| Posted on 2008-01-28 00:00:00 | by Pseudon IM | [ Reply to This ]
  Aaaah, love! One sage philosopher (or poet) says "it makes the world go round"! And so it does! Without love, where would we be?

This is really excellent, but that no surprise, as all of your work is!! Makes one think fondly about that "special one" in one's life!!!! Nice work, Frank!
| Posted on 2008-01-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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