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    dots Submission Name: What?dots
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    Author: SanctityExposed
    ASL Info:    22
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 47/65/38
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 234
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Yeah, really...what?


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    dotsWhat?dots
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    Breathe in
    Release
    Temperament
    Write-off
    Life to tabloids
    Death to Paparz
    Definition General
    Walk one foot at a
    Time
    Timeless, without prejudice.
    Love.




    Submitted on 2008-01-25 15:09:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The seemingly randomness definitely was the way to go with this poem...it makes it more easy to relate to.
    | Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by DemonicInk | [ Reply to This ]
      Very familiar feeling, I have a lot of days this could relate to. The way each phrase sort of "flips" or rolls perpendicularly into the next stage of mindset is interesting and well-used.
    | Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by catechism42 | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this, brief and seemingly random, though i know it's not. it probably holds far greater meaning for you than those who read it.
    one of those life is.... sort of things
    nice
    | Posted on 2008-01-26 00:00:00 | by strangeling | [ Reply to This ]


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