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Submission Name:
Ghazal for my Deceased Cat
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Author:
azurwarrior
ASL Info:
44/m/SoCal
Elite Ratio:
5.03 - 86/85/63
Words:
49
Class/Type:
Poetry/Death
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I wrote this right after my cat Spar-kle passed away.
If you're not a cat lover, don't read this.
Ghazal for my Deceased Cat
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I saw unmistakably, my deep bond with you.
To a grave weeping, while I lift you.
No more pain, yea this is true.
And your earthly body was not truly you.
You couldn't die if you weren't born too.
The eternal shines constant. Still I miss you.
Submitted on 2008-01-25 20:33:09
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I'm a cat person.
What is a ghazal? Is it a verseform? I see the rhyme rule, but the metre is interesting in this poem - is that part of the form, or is it your own feeling for the variations?
| Posted on 2008-02-07 00:00:00 | by
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