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    dots Submission Name: goodbye my lovedots
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    Author: isaiahc4
    ASL Info:    26/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.28 - 120/196/60
    Words: 243
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 153
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1554



    Description:
       the ending of an era the ending of a marriage.


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    dotsgoodbye my lovedots
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    our love it has moved mountains
    our dreams weve made come true.
    We laughed when trouble surfaced,
    because we knew we'd make it through.

    We've been there for each other,
    held each other through the years.
    Made a couple children,
    and pushed together through the tears.

    but time i guess has took a tole,
    on this once so great a love.
    now this friendship we have made,
    and this marriage i can't be part of

    has fallen victim to lifes plan,
    to make me live in constant pain.
    the person I still adore,
    says that she cannot remain.

    what could i have done,
    what could i do differently.
    how could i have changed my life,
    to make it where you'd stay with me.

    if this is it , if it's good bye,
    i'll just let it be.
    and hope that someday you will find,
    the love that you have lost with me.

    I hope that you'll be happy,
    while I go fight the war.
    I hope that you'll find new love,
    stronger than this one was before.

    keep our children safe from harm,
    I'm glad you'll miss my nights of tears.
    so you can go on with your life,
    and do away with three long years.

    so good bye for now my love my wife
    I'll miss you while I'm gone away.
    But soldiers get to come back home
    I'll look forward to that day.




    Submitted on 2008-01-26 09:54:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very touching and sad. I feel the pain you're feeling when I read this, and it makes me want to cry. It's so apparent how much you love her and your children, and yet you have to accept life the way it comes at you. I wish you all the best, God bless you.
    | Posted on 2008-01-26 00:00:00 | by black_beauty18 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this poem. It's more than just words...it allows you to feel. I think that anyone that can do that with their writing is truly talented. And I hope you best.
    | Posted on 2008-01-26 00:00:00 | by Jeka | [ Reply to This ]



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