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    dots Submission Name: Something Elsedots
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    Author: Piper
    ASL Info:    17/ Female/ Europe
    Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 31/41/27
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 114
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 885



    Description:
       Just a simple poem about a loved one leaving me. It sucks, I know.


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    dotsSomething Elsedots
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    How it happened
    I will never know
    Just light up a cigarette
    Try not to sink below.

    Some things are bad
    But can turn out to be good
    It never happens to me
    Of course, it's understood.

    Pop some pills to function,
    Pop some pills to live,
    And after I get up,
    Try to make him believe.

    Why are you leaving?
    You stupid man
    There's no reason
    And I don't understand.

    Just let me forget
    The feelings you bring,
    Let me let go of you
    Find another thing.

    I need an addiction
    Something to depend on
    If I lose that something
    My sanity will be gone.

    So goodbye dear,
    Leave and don't come back
    Maybe I still need you
    But I won't wear black.




    Submitted on 2008-01-26 12:39:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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