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    dots Submission Name: Numbdots
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    Author: openxandxbleedi
    ASL Info:    16/Female/Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 115
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 891



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    Have you ever felt so numb
    That you lay there with no feeling
    Even when you wanna cry
    But you can't even remember why
    The numbness where you just don't care
    You cannot move
    And all you have is a blank stare
    Into darkness that doesn't exist
    But it doesn't matter, because to you its a bliss
    Even the words "I love you" can't bring you back
    Because you're not sure if it's a fact
    You feel so empty
    Without what used to be inside
    Even if it's there
    You'll never feel right
    Your just so numb
    You can't even move your thumb
    And finally when you wake up
    Your numbness finally gone
    You cry 'cause you remember, all that went wrong
    But no matter what, you can't ever go back to being numb.




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