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    dots Submission Name: ESCAPEdots
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    Author: 12Rounds
    ASL Info:    21/male/orange county C,A
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 573
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    Bytes: 711



    Description:
       I DUNNO REALLY WHAT IT IS I WROTE THIS ALONG WITH MANY MORE WHILE I WAS TRYING TO DEFEAT MY ADDICTION TO METH...IT WAS A BATTLE LIKE NO OTHER..


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    iv risin out the pits of hell, to reign a terrorable scorn no false pretenses hear my men the valleys floors will fill of bone.and the once found courage inside a man will no longer kindle the night, the vary image of my symbole will reak of peace but signafy the return of a spirits fight. intensified with time i feel the moments bursts patiences plays the part of pride becomes my friend and then my curse, the sky lights up but only to dim at night i count the hours in minutes. i put to bed the obsessive side for its weakness is not needed, the days they act accordenly they move threw moons rather quick, but every day thats not the day strengthens my shiver darkens deep my eyes and tightens up my grip




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