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    dots Submission Name: The Kiss Of Eternity - For Logandots
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    Author: SanctityExposed
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 48/66/40
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       Something for my best friend. Keep on, man, keep on.


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    dotsThe Kiss Of Eternity - For Logandots
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    For Logan--

    Man, you be like my brother.

    We're always there,
    breathing with one another.

    And here I'll stay
    by your side.

    Forever and a day,
    we'll take the ride.

    You said one time
    you're in a boat.

    I gave you mine,
    and we're still afloat.

    Up the creek,
    with just one paddle

    What's new this week?
    Back in the saddle.

    Shit's been deep,
    man, shit's been rough.

    But on we keep,
    can't break the tough.

    I give you my words,
    words that save.

    And one thing's for sure,
    my heart I gave.

    Passionate lover,
    oh Logan dear.

    No love for another,
    keep Leah near.

    This time proves hard,
    but believe in this

    You've been dealt a card,
    captured within a kiss.

    I love you man,
    I love you deep.

    No way in hell I can
    break this promise I plan to keep.




    Submitted on 2008-01-27 00:13:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I never commented on this piece, though I really should have. Never let you know how much I appreciate your support and friendship. These last few days have been rather difficult on me. I miss my friend, despite the distance of a thousand miles I've always felt rather close to you. One can hope those summer-plans will work out, but you never know. I personally am looking forward to it...

    This is a really sweet poem by a sweeter girl, it's good to feel loved like that...

    One day maybe I can return the favor. My life is in such deimos and tumult right now. When things settle down, hopefully, we'll be able to catch up...

    Thank you again luv, and I miss you a [censored]in lot!
    | Posted on 2008-02-22 00:00:00 | by Flynn | [ Reply to This ]
      Awww, it's so sweet, how much you care for Flynneh. Indeed he is a good man, and has seem to hit upon some bad times (I, of course, don't know the whole story), but in his last few submissions he has seemed a bit bitter (even though his rants were all true). Thanks for caring so much Sanctity, it was a beautiful read/write.

    Duv
    | Posted on 2008-02-17 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]


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