Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: The Kiss Of Eternity - For Logandots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: SanctityExposed
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 48/66/40
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 634
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1174



    Description:
       Something for my best friend. Keep on, man, keep on.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Kiss Of Eternity - For Logandots
    -------------------------------------------


    For Logan--

    Man, you be like my brother.

    We're always there,
    breathing with one another.

    And here I'll stay
    by your side.

    Forever and a day,
    we'll take the ride.

    You said one time
    you're in a boat.

    I gave you mine,
    and we're still afloat.

    Up the creek,
    with just one paddle

    What's new this week?
    Back in the saddle.

    Shit's been deep,
    man, shit's been rough.

    But on we keep,
    can't break the tough.

    I give you my words,
    words that save.

    And one thing's for sure,
    my heart I gave.

    Passionate lover,
    oh Logan dear.

    No love for another,
    keep Leah near.

    This time proves hard,
    but believe in this

    You've been dealt a card,
    captured within a kiss.

    I love you man,
    I love you deep.

    No way in hell I can
    break this promise I plan to keep.




    Submitted on 2008-01-27 00:13:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I never commented on this piece, though I really should have. Never let you know how much I appreciate your support and friendship. These last few days have been rather difficult on me. I miss my friend, despite the distance of a thousand miles I've always felt rather close to you. One can hope those summer-plans will work out, but you never know. I personally am looking forward to it...

    This is a really sweet poem by a sweeter girl, it's good to feel loved like that...

    One day maybe I can return the favor. My life is in such deimos and tumult right now. When things settle down, hopefully, we'll be able to catch up...

    Thank you again luv, and I miss you a [censored]in lot!
    | Posted on 2008-02-22 00:00:00 | by Flynn | [ Reply to This ]
      Awww, it's so sweet, how much you care for Flynneh. Indeed he is a good man, and has seem to hit upon some bad times (I, of course, don't know the whole story), but in his last few submissions he has seemed a bit bitter (even though his rants were all true). Thanks for caring so much Sanctity, it was a beautiful read/write.

    Duv
    | Posted on 2008-02-17 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    156600

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Relativity written by poetotoe
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    Angel Eyes written by poetotoe
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Carry written by saartha
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    Redemption written by poetotoe
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Records I written by Raphael
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    The World written by jjd
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry