Description: This is a song based on a few things floating in my mind recently. I hope it is coherent. I tried to utilize a good bit of "expiremental" writing for lack of a better word. All I mean by that is expiremental for me, I used spacing and "/"'s to try and display how it was in my head to the best of my ability. Tell me if it added to the flow of it or ruined it or what.
i've got a lot of things that i don't wantnt you to see
locked up in my boring room
i don't see why i'm so scared of me
but don't you know that i'm a liar just like you
together we'd be somewhat closer to true
atleast we could eliminate our selves
and we don't have to hurt nobody else
and no one out there works just like you
we sure were perfect for me then
but now i'm feeling sick and old
and you're more like the movies told (you'd be)
late i don't see how i could grow with you
you know we're more alive/ then the things we do
and i don't want to grow up just like that
maybe i wont' grow up/ at all
maybe we're the mirrors we've been choking
and we're the dust that has been blowing
so if you are a liar just like me
can't you please just let me see
it's getting so hard to let you be
but i'm not about to get down on my knees/ and ask for another answer to this problem
/lets find a way back/
and we won't have to /hurt/ nobody else
Submission Name: nobody else
