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    dots Submission Name: the blue apples of your goddots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    29/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 126/256/239
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 78
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1197



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    dotsthe blue apples of your goddots
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    dearest missing,
    in the moon where you are hidden
    there are creatures.
    they are folding
    in the fog,
    the blankets of your unrapture.

    sow me a star
    where all our pillars are.
    where the black islands
    current the palm of pyramids
    that hang in your eye.

    i've gazed around your neck
    in my sleep
    looking for the blue apples
    of your god.
    your golden saviour
    coddled me in the blistered park.

    i grieve a lonely road
    you once travelled.
    & i've seen your mistaken steps
    burned into the ground
    before me.
    there are many ways to weep
    in the weapon of heat
    & i am a furnace.

    blue goddess awaken,
    i am sleeping.
    i need the white gold
    of summer
    to dust my fruitful tongue.

    in my hands
    i disk a palm of halos
    towards the sun.
    i'm creaking
    slowly past your door.

    open
    & i will remember you.
    stay closed
    & i will brown,
    curl & upwards
    towards the sun...




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      ACK!! beautious. the desperate climb before the desention. almost through the eyes of a plant. i am blinded by your imagry

    ~alice
    | Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]



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