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    dots Submission Name: A new life dots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsA new life dots
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    A new life is always so sweet to be around
    it gives you a new perspctive of the world
    just like how it feels to hear
    the cry of a new baby left alone
    helps remind you of how it feels
    to be left by yourself all alone
    with out love in your life to speak of
    it will make even the strongest man wail and cry
    from deep with in his heart and soul
    or the fact that we are all born to die
    we take for granit too much how our life
    may effect others and even at our worst
    hurt the one's we love and need the most
    unlike life and death as well as taxes
    we do have control of what we do to others
    so let a new life of giving and love
    be on all of our hearts in this time
    of depression and disspare

    peace out
    Mekisha




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