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    dots Submission Name: Devil in Disguisedots
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    Author: BeautifulSoul
    ASL Info:    17/F/In
    Elite Ratio:    7.5 - 51/22/16
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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       When the world turns against you...you must fight back.


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    dotsDevil in Disguisedots
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    She's like a thorn in the heart,
    making all wish from this world she would depart.
    No roses grow from this thorny seed,
    as she punishes all for one man's greed.
    She causes every human pain,
    in her death all will gain.
    How much can one human endure,
    before death seems like such a sweet lure?
    Some say she is the devil in disguise,
    but in reality shes only a girl trying to stifle her cries.




    Submitted on 2008-01-28 13:26:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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