Hey this piece was really profound in and unique i have to admit. I had to mull it over a few times to really get the impact but enjoyed it more and more each time! This was brilliant in a sense and also very thought provoking! I loved it in it's entirety. This is good but i see you have deleted most of your works :-( so how can i read them?
Ha anyways did you know that Shawn means "God is graceful"? Just a random thought i felt like throwing in hehe.
Anyways thanks for sharing this great read with us!
I love this. This has the old armand touch to it, with the whole religion scene. Whether you seem to be for god or against him in your writes, you always seem to have some sort of a mystery that makes the reader want to keep reading no matter their particular beliefs.
I liked this, it read well and spurred my curiousity to read more. My favorite lines were
"we waste this bittersweet life
for a chance to suffer"
a very apt description of life, but i would think must suffer in order to know joy(which is what I feel I waste my life seeking, but it's funny how often that leads to suffering). Also enjoyed the allusion to the life of Christ which is symbolic of what you described. Looking forward to the other parts