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    dots Submission Name: Artful Deathdots
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    Author: BeautifulSoul
    ASL Info:    17/F/In
    Elite Ratio:    7.48 - 79/54/23
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 169
    Average Vote:    2.5000
    Bytes: 270



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    dotsArtful Deathdots
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    Death is an art,
    when on your own you decide to depart.
    You may choose how to die,
    to leave this earth in truth or only a lie.
    To go in pain,
    or in soft deep sleep,
    there'll be no shame,
    when you're buried deep.




    Submitted on 2008-01-28 14:17:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I will have to disagree with you on death is an art. I don't think it is, there is nothing artful about it when you decide to end your life. It just shows how much pain you were in and the cruelty of the people around you when they didn't see how much you were hurting and didn't stop it from occurring. You are write about the rest of the stuff though. However, it isn't right to take your life because of the pain. Remember others have the same ordeal.
    | Posted on 2008-10-24 00:00:00 | by DemonofHeaven | [ Reply to This ]


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