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    dots Submission Name: Get Updots
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    Author: Piper
    ASL Info:    17/ Female/ Europe
    Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 31/41/27
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 108
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 562



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    It is easy to watch,
    As the other people fight,
    And it's easy to sleep,
    When the others struggle
    Through the night.

    It is easy to dream,
    To wish and to hope,
    But why don't you get up,
    And just try to cope?

    I need you to get up,
    To raise from your bed,
    I need you to struggle,
    Not sleep instead.

    I know you can do it,
    Pride is shining through your eyes,
    And I can see you marching,
    You're winning that prize.




    Submitted on 2008-01-28 14:33:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      An interesting piece. Words of encouragement, that's how I can describe it.

    However phrases being used here are so-called typical phrases. Would be better if you can construct a new phrase, which would probably deliver the same meaning, but, you know, in a different way ;)
    | Posted on 2008-01-29 00:00:00 | by iLLeGaL pLaYeR | [ Reply to This ]



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