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    dots Submission Name: Getting olderdots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 792
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    dotsGetting olderdots
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    Getting older
    Expanding my knowledge
    Looking forward
    Becoming a young lady
    Leading my way
    Spreading my skills
    Flying to a new adventure
    Taking a hold of what my world throws at me

    Getting older
    Growing up
    Changing
    Becoming a woman
    Leading my own life
    Spreading my wings
    Flying the coupe
    Taking charge of my world

    Getting older
    Intensifying
    Slightly regressing
    Becoming an adult
    Giving my life to another
    Settling down
    Finding a nest
    Taking a ride in my world

    Getting older
    Maturing
    Transforming
    Becoming an elder
    Giving my life’s wisdom
    Making plans
    Finding rest
    Taking a last look at my world.




    Submitted on 2008-01-28 18:17:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very intriging keeping the readers attention, and interist in to the poem.

    Surpiringly capturing!
    In fact it made me think of how I am geting older -- and how I am going to be 25 july 6th


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    | Posted on 2009-06-22 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem captures the essence of aging from the excitment of childhood to the serenity of old age. a good read though it lacks in emotion.
    | Posted on 2008-01-28 00:00:00 | by Hazy skies | [ Reply to This ]


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