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    dots Submission Name: Chi Chapter 2dots
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    Author: FinalConflict
    Elite Ratio:    0.89 - 0/0/12
    Words: 512
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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       Chapter 2 of my Manga.


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    dotsChi Chapter 2dots
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    CHAPTER 2: Makoto Kissimmee

    (Shows Chapter 2 Page)

    They stare at each other for a minute.
    Makoto: You care to take the first move?
    Masashi runs at Makoto.
    Makoto's arm starts glowing. He swoops his arm at the air(at a diagonal angle)
    A flat sharp rock shoots out of the ground right in front of Masashi.
    Masashi kicks off of it.
    In the air he takes two knifes out of his pocket and throws them at Makoto.
    Makoto swoops his arm twice and a rock comes up in front of him and blocks the knives.
    And another comes up under Masashi.
    Masashi kicks off from the top.
    With his back facing Makoto he reaches in his pocket and throws two more knives at him.
    Makoto swoops his arm and makes another flat rock wall in front of him.
    The knives go around the wall and head back him.
    Makoto thought: Not bad.
    Makoto crosses his arms and blocks the knives with a small rock wall.
    Masashi drops to the ground.
    Makoto picks up the knives.
    Throws them at Masashi.
    Masashi jumps to the side and in the air.
    Masashi lands on the ground.
    Makoto: Let's see how you handle this.
    Big rock shoots out of the ground and pushes Masashi into the air. Another rock shoots up right as the other disappears and Masashi looks up just at the right time to dodge it.
    Many many many more come up and he pushes off of them, dodges them, and kicks off of them.(about a page)
    Masashi lands on the ground.
    Masashi thought: This guy's good. I'm not sure if I can beat him from this far away.
    Masashi runs at Makoto.
    A rock shoots up. He puts his hand on the top and the spike at the top goes through his hand.
    He pushes off and takes his hand out. Blood is on the rock and flies in the air.
    Masashi land by Makoto
    Masashi kicks at him
    Makoto blocks it with his arm.
    Masashi: So you can use your arms for something else than Chi.
    Makoto: Surprised?
    Masashi: A little bit.
    Masashi takes his leg down and punches at him.
    Makoto blocks.
    Masashi tries to knee him.
    Makoto: Blocks it with his knee and chest.
    Masashi smirks.
    Masashi pushes off from Makoto's knee and flips above him.
    Masashi chops at him.
    Makoto ducks.
    Makoto tries to leg sweep him.
    Masashi jumps.
    Masashi flips 180°
    grabs Makoto's shoulders and throws him high into the air.
    Masashi: This might surprise you...
    Masashi shoots multiple fire balls at Makoto.
    Makoto's eyes are wide thought: Liar.
    Makoto shoots Earth balls at them and counters.
    Makoto lands.
    Makoto: This is gonna be fun
    Masashi: Heh.
    Makoto takes the sleeves off his arms.
    Aston: Makoto. Be careful now. Don’t kill the boy.
    Masashi snap(the thing when they are surprised).
    Makoto: Don’t worry…I won’t.
    Aston: Your going to be late. You have to leave in 10 minutes, hurry.
    Makoto: Again Dad…
    Masashi focuses.
    Makoto: Don’t worry
    Shows Makoto’s arms glowing furiously: This won’t take 5 minutes.




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