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    dots Submission Name: Chi Chapter 8dots
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    Author: FinalConflict
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    Words: 723
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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       Chapter 8 of my Manga.


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    dotsChi Chapter 8dots
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    CHAPTER 8: Invasion! Battle For Their Lives!

    Someone behind the group: We of Glacier Village….have declared war.
    Solomon !
    Solomon pushes off from the ground and flies over to the group of students.
    Solomon: Listen up, these people are dangerous, you will most likely die. Retreat to the safe house and take cover.
    Everyone looks at each other.
    Mamocho: Heh.
    Solomon: What’re you doing? Go!
    Someone from above: Don’t think so, sensei. This looks to be fun.
    Solomon: Stupid kids this isn’t a---!!!
    Shows Trige and Cho standing up there surrounded by dead soldiers.
    Solomon: W-w-w-what?
    Hatake: We’re stronger than we look.
    Solomon: *sighs*
    Solomon: Fine, but don’t come crying to me when your dead.
    Hatake: Don’t worry…
    Hatake: That’s impossible.
    They all disappear.

    (Shows Chapter Page)

    Shows the huts mostly destroyed and burning and a lot of people fighting.
    Hatake and Mamocho standing on a roof.
    Hatake: Heh.
    Mamocho: Bet I can kill more.
    Hatake: Your on!
    Hatake throws a knife in front of him.
    Knife hits enemy in chest: 1.
    Hatake jumps off the roof.
    Hatake balls up: Haaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
    Hatake un-balls and lightning bolts shoot out and hit the ground and 6 people.
    Hatake: Heh, that’s seven.
    Shows 11 men running at Hatake.
    Mamocho jumps down.
    Mamocho punches the ground.
    The ground flips and propels them at the wall behind Mamocho.
    Mamocho grabs the large piece of earth.
    Mamocho throws it at the men behind him.
    The large piece of Earth hits the men.
    The piece of earth falls down.
    Blood covers the wall with all the men smashed up against it.
    Mamocho: Heh, 11 in one shot.
    Hatake: Go to hell.
    Someone behind Hatake: That can be arranged!
    Hatake and Mamocho: !
    The person is impaled in the head by an Earth spike.
    Makoto, on the corner: You need to be more observant.
    Hatake: Right, thanks.
    Someone: Try taking your own advice, you need to be more off guard.
    Makoto: Damn!
    Masashi kicks the person threw the wall.
    Masashi: Try taking yours.
    Masashi looks to his left.
    Shows Hikoro staring at another person.
    The person throws four knives at Hikoro.
    Hikoro steps forward, leans slightly to the left, dodging one knife, then ducking and still walking, dodging the second. Then jerks his head back dodging the third, and spins around dodging the fourth.
    Hikoro steps towards the man and pulls his right hand back.
    Hits his opponent with incredible air pressure shooting his opponent back and destroying four huts in front of him.
    Hikoro gives a thumbs up sign.
    Masashi and Makoto nod.
    Two knives hit the hut to the right of Hikoro.
    Hikoro: Gettin’ rusty on your aim, Kinch.
    Kinche: Heh, won’t happen again.
    Kinche’s opponent jumps at him.
    Kinche spins down and pushes up with his hands, kicking his opponent many, many times in the stomach.
    Kinche swings his foot down to the ground and pushes off from the roof.
    Kinche jams to fingers in between his opponent’s ribs: **SFX Crack!**
    Kinche’s Opponent coughs up blood: **SFX cough**
    Kinche drops to the ground and his opponent hits the ground.
    Hikoro: Where’s Luna?
    Kinche: Take three steps forward.
    Hikoro takes three steps forward.
    A very large white hand with red and yellow stripes slams against the ground with a Glacier Village Soldier under it.
    Kinche: She’s right there.
    Luna appears on the large hand.
    The large hand melts to paste.
    Luna: How many more you think are left.
    Trige slams against the wall behind Luna and Kinche.
    Trige dodges a punch.
    Trige punches person in the face.
    Trige grabs his opponent’s face and slams his head into the ground.
    Trige: Too many.
    Hikoro: Damn, how are we supposed to do this with all of the teachers except two away!
    Hatake: It just shows how good we are to fight all these people by ourselves and not ge----
    Luna: Don’t finish your sentence…
    Hatake: What?
    Luna points ahead through the rubble of huts that Hikoro caused at a shadowy figure.
    The shadowy figure gets punched in the face and the figure falls to the ground.
    The figure gets back up slowly.
    Once the figure is standing upright again the figure is hit with around 8 knives to the chest and stomach.
    The person falls.
    Luna covers her mouth with her hand, Everyone else: !.
    (End of Chapter)




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