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    dots Submission Name: Chi Chapter 10dots
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    Author: FinalConflict
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       Chapter 10 of my Manga.


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    dotsChi Chapter 10dots
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    Chapter 10: The Remaining Five....

    Hatake picks up a rock.
    Hatake throws it in the pile of other rocks.
    Hatake, Trige and Shino: !
    Shino: What the hell was that?
    Hatake: We should go check it out.
    Trige: No, stick to the task we were assigned, that’s their job.
    Hatake: But-
    Trige: No buts, This is our job, that is theirs.
    Hatake looks away.
    (shows the night sky)
    (shows smoke)
    (shows the smoke with five figures in it)
    (shows the smoke with the five figures getting closer)
    (shows the five figures close up)
    (the one in the middle is smirking, everyone else is either smiling or looking at something else)
    Makoto: Who’re they?
    Hikoro: I don’t know…
    The one in the middle: We’re Chi Lords.
    Everyone(Masashi, Makoto, Kinche, Luna and Hikoro): !!!
    The one in the middle: Heh…let’s have some fun shall we? But before we kill you…it’s common courtesy to give your opponent their name before engaging in battle.
    Kinche thought: Is he serious!
    (Going from Left to right.)Shows the person on the far left: That’s Iche.
    Shows the person to the left of him: Soa.
    The middle person: I’m Nato.
    The person next to him: That’s Reign.
    The person on the far right: And Rakura.
    Nato: Now then….how do you wanna do this….Divide up…or every man for himself…
    Hikoro and Makoto look at each other.
    Hikoro, glaring: I guess we’ll divide up.
    Nato: Heh, I was hoping you’d say that. So then….you get to pick the location and your opponent…
    They all say nothing.
    Nato: Go on….
    Masashi: Fine….I’ll fight Reign…in the field to the South-West.
    Regin nods.
    Reign and Masashi disappear.
    Makoto: I’ll take you….Nato….right here.
    Nato: Very well.
    Luna: I’ll take the guy with the stupid name….
    Soa and Iche look at each other confused and pointing at each other in question.
    Nato: Which person with the stupid name?
    Luna: Uh….I-Iche…..up on the cliff.
    Luna and Iche disappear.
    Kinche, under his breath: Be careful…
    Nato: So that just leaves you too.
    Hikoro: Fine…Rakura…a little west of here in the village.
    Rakura and Hikoro disappear.
    Soa: Last…again….man!
    Soa pouts.
    Nato thumps in the back of Soa’s head: Shut up…
    Soa, glaring: Still, I’m always picked last.
    Kinche: We’ll fight in the woods.
    Kinche and Soa walk off.
    Makoto: Well….
    Nato: Let’s begin.
    Shows Masashi, Luna, Kinche, Makoto, Hikoro, Nato, Soa, Rakura, Reign and Iche through split-screen.


    (Shows Chapter Page)

    Kinche and Soa standing across from each other in the woods.
    Kinche squints.
    Kinche: !
    Kinche dives to the left as a knife hits the tree behind him.
    Kinche: !
    Kinche pushes off the ground into the air as another knife hit’s the tree behind him.
    Kinche flips up on a large tree branch.
    Soa: Kinche Izzymoto.
    Kinche thought: What!
    Soa: You are unable to use normal elemental Chi, all you can do is Weapon Mastery.
    Kinche thought: How the hell does he know that!
    Soa: This is your second year here, your best friends are Makoto, Hikoro and Luna. You just joined a new team, with your best friends and a talented newbie.
    Soa: And you secretly---
    Kinche: That’s enough…how do you know all of this.
    Soa: I’m a psychic, I can read your mind…and I can see your next move before you know what your going to do.
    Kinche thought: Crap!
    Soa: That is why that I have only been defeated by members of my own team…no one else can get around that…so…
    Soa takes out two knives.
    Soa: Shall we?
    Kinche grits his teeth: !
    Shows Makoto and Nato facing each other.
    Makoto pushes off the ground with his feet.
    Makoto slashes his arm.
    A spiked wall of earth shoots up at Nato.
    Nato slashes his arm.
    A spiked wall of earth starts to shoot up.
    Nato’s wall shoots through Makoto’s.
    Makoto thought: What!
    Makoto slashes his arms many times.
    Around 6 spiked earth walls shoots up from various areas and shoot at Nato.
    Nato slashes his arm up.
    A small Earth wall about as wide as Nato’s hand shoots up and blocks all 6 of Makoto’s walls.
    Makoto grits his teeth.
    Nato: Don’t feel bad. My earth walls are stronger than anything you can come up with.
    Makoto: …
    Nato: So give up…and let me kill you…
    Makoto: Fine….
    Nato: ?
    Makoto: I give up….
    Nato: What?
    Makoto: You can kill me….
    (End of Chapter)




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